-Don't use the same clip twice (first person :22 and angle 1:02) -Work on syncing things other than the last kill in a clip *sync transitions, shots, and cut clips to create your own places to sync. -Find more original song choice. Fireflies is really overused. *Fireflies has a lot of editing potential, but people get annoyed when it's used 5-6 times. -The two ending overviews seemed a little random. *Could have been a good credits area. Static wanted all the videos to have "In association with Project360Films" and "Gameplay by Static Hazard". Btw- If you saw the one uploaded yesterday, that was mine.
i actually think the content is very nice.. the editing isnt great though.. it reminds me of my montages xD the intro credits should be slowed a bit, and the ending overviews shouldnt really be included unless its part of the end credits.. i wouldnt use that particular narrows clip though, it shows lag in the gameplay. good effort though