i made this up in a matter of seconds in my health class today In the morning I saw a frog, Then I said, "Why are you not in a bog?" He told me that he had to leave, he couldn't even make his bed. I told the frog that is just too bad. He looked into my eyes and told me, It makes him sad, being away from everything that he once knew. If only it all came to, or he didn't have to go. I said to the frog, it isn't all bad. But he just looked away, then i heard it say. "You don't know my life" Then It said, "goodbye", Then hop away ANd I continued walking. here is another i wrote kinda morbid but i wrote it to make my freind in health class get mad at me As i was out A bird fell from a tree It hit the ground Bout three feet infront of me It was dead i could see And its neck was broken But i just walked on by Nothing was ever spoken
heehee i love your whole aabbcc rhyme scheme.. it makes it seem so light and carefree.. i like the second one.. very deep