Hey, I've been working on an introduction which will go on in the beginning of all my videos. It'll go on ALL of my newest videos, so I REALLY need your guy's comments. (watch in high quality plz) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UaqS_gOBMDYKeep in mind it's meant to be short... it's just the intro. Thanks
I think it is ok. The hammer thing in the beginning would not be my choice, but w/e, if you like it, you should use it. Anyways, the second thing could be improved: a) the text: the "presents" seems crooked. You should make it more pleasing for the eye. b) this "light" effect starting in the top left corner stays exactly the same and moves straight through the screen. This way, it does not look like lighting, but just like... something going round. You should make it so it changes size/ position thing, just like in most of the videos where they used this. (I think you know what I want to say). Thats the most important you can improve I think.