Alright this is my first definite use of C4D's so plz tell me what you think. Edit - MY new new sig... which one you like better and any comments on both thanks in advance
The text doesn't complement the signature and you don't always have to put the text in the corner. Make the text a color from the sig, place it closer to the focal, and blend it into the BG. Also I would erase the c4d that is overlapping the focal. So that it doesn't cover up the spartan and take your attention away from the focal. edit: The second one is much better. You did a much better job. You actually took my advice.