my first sig in a while

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by d4rkdemon, Oct 3, 2010.

  1. d4rkdemon

    d4rkdemon Ancient
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    most of you guys proberly dont remember me, i used to post maps an i posted a few sigs, i now use gimp and this is my latest sig

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    tell me what you guys think

    thanks, jay
     
  2. Monolith

    Monolith Ancient
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    Seems a bit pixelated

    The text is.. strange. Is that supposed to be electricity?
     
  3. ricklaver

    ricklaver Forerunner

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    Yes the gun is not so clear other wise you make nice creation I like it. but I suggest you to try to make picture clean that any one can clearly Identify the object.
     
  4. Halo Orlando

    Halo Orlando Ancient
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    Flow sucks, there is no direction to it.
    No clearly defined focal.
    Mess of different effects conflicting doesnt look good.
    Text is not very well done, the precise outer glow/electric thing looks weird, one of the letters is overwritten by effects, and there seems to be no work put into its placement other than to fill up empty space.
    Render isnt the focal, and the effects kinda reduce its visibility further.
     
  5. RightSideTheory

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    I can see some ideas working here, but overall it's not that great. It's good for a beginner signature, to be sure. First off you're going to want to get ride of that pixilation, it kills the image. Second, you're going want to work on getting your focuses, the text takes too much attention, and the render doesn't really pop out enough.

    I'd suggest working on some more signatures, and most importantly, looking through some tutorials and learning from them.
     

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