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  1. Juggernaut

    Juggernaut Ancient
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    A Figure in my World:

    You approach...
    Such a perfect figure
    Skin as soft a silk
    Such cherry red lips
    Beautiful brown hair perfectly parted
    Your eyes look as emeralds
    Such a dream in a world I would love to be part of...

    Take My Hand:

    I want you to take a chance, make a change.
    I hold my hand out towards you. Take my hand and make a change.
    You've had pain in your past, you need time to heal.
    Well let me help you heal, let me treat you better than ever.
    Because unlike the ones you had, I'll care for you.
    I'll be there for you. I'll always treat you good.
    So just take my hand and lets take a chance.
    I'll help you heal, I promise...

    A little something I thought up of, bout a girl. She's very pretty.
     
    #1 Juggernaut, Oct 8, 2009
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  2. Knight Kninja

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    very nice, i can tell you put your heart into them.

    it always helps to have someone to think about, it really inspires
     

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