Mongoose

Not bad, but seems to be lacking a focal.

 

This is better than your previous ones. The background looks cool and the blurring on the mongoose looks very professional

 

I like the smugging, pretty good, I think your sigs are getting progressivley better.

 

it looks really low quality...

 

Agreed.

Also, your smudging is too much in some areas, but not enough in others.

 

Maybe if you don't smudge the diver, and you sharpen him, It might solve the lack of focal problem.

 

Good job on that smudging. I really like the way it looks.

 

LQ, and the c4d ruins it, also, get rid of the green color at the top.

 

The center of the mongoose is blurry. Like many others have said, if the image looks blurry or is low quality, find something better. I'm really easy to find Halo images on B.Net. I could probably find something similar to that in a heartbeat. Also, get some more C4Ds. I have yet to host my 700+ on some file sharing site, but when I do I'll send the link to you. Keep practicing.