I'm not a big fan of the swirl effect, it's just, it's distracting really. And the stock/render you used was just unlucky. I hate this one.
Ish cool, though I think the clipping masks would be better if they were above and below the text. It's like, one-tenth abstract art, I swear.
Like I said in off-topic, the swirl is very ugly and makes his stomach look deformed in a bad way. The colors are pretty good too. Now stop with the clipping masks for awhile.
Try a new technique for one other signature . Not a big fan of this siggy, sorry man. Also the swirl kinda weird, and I thought it was Gears of War 2 lol.