Meh SOTW

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  1. M.Jelleh

    M.Jelleh Ancient
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  2. Norlinsky

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    The goggles look too fake. They seem to float in front of her face instead of resting there.
     
  3. M.Jelleh

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    I think that might be because I contrasted them too much, and you can't see the right side. I see what you mean though.
     
  4. Randle Scandal

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    I agree with Nor, the goggles seem to be just pasted on rather then blending with the girl.

    the rest of the image seems too monotone, so i might spice it up with some color.
     
  5. god4

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    All I can say is you need to make the goggles look more real and like they're actually on her.
     
  6. Knight Kninja

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    yep, goggles.. try doing some shading on the sides i guess... its hard to say what would make it blend better..
     
  7. Yeti

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    Maybe a slight drop shadow would make the goggles look more real?

    I don't know, I'm not too good at that kind of stuff.

    Other than that, I think your entry is pretty good.
     

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