Master Chief

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  1. IX Dr Doom XI

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  2. J4M NUTST3R

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    Great colours IMO, well done. The distortions are good, but that's all there is to this, try a few other filters, C4D's etc. instead of pure distortions. You also have a huge distortion on your focal, which isn't such a good idea. Also, that distortion ruins the flow, I would have said it was bottom left to top right (direction of MC), but that makes it almost vertical.
     
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    Theres was more to the the sig, C4Ds, filters , etc. but after doing the liquifying distortion and erasing the right side and off the focal, i felt the sig was done, except for a few things here and there like blending and text. I know what your saying though, just doing one distortion to a sig isnt very artistic, but if it does its job then so be it.

    As for flow, i dont know why but i feel like it does have flow, the liquifyed right side makes the flow come from the left bottom corner to to the top right part of the sig near the chief's helmet but i do understand what you are saying as well, it is alittle messed up.

    Thanks though for the feedback, your probably the only guy that will give feedback to people. Everyone else just looks and moves to other sigs and doesnt post anything.
     
  4. KratosAurion777

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    I give a lot of feedback to people... my CnCs are usually at least one paragraph, and often not only CnC but suggest techniques to improve.

    I agree with J4M NUTST3R on every point. The colors are quite good in this sig. I think that the distortion does ruin the flow, because the waves of the distortion are at a 45 degree angle or so, while the spartan's head is pointed at a 30 degree or so angle. The other C4Ds also go against the flow. I think that the yellow spots on the spartan look out of place. The text under "Master Chief" is too small, I zoomed in to 600% of the regular zoom, and still had to squint a bit to read it. If it isn't supposed to be legible, make it even smaller, otherwise make it a few points larger.

    Overall, it is a pretty good sig, but the flow needs improvement.
     

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