Master Cheif Drawing!

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  1. Miraj

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    My first drawing that I actually didn't doodle, and worked hard on. I used a very blunt pencil that I sharpened using a knife and some computer paper, so the shading was bleh..

    Please note that I have never taken any art classes in the past, so what you are about to see is complete fail. I just thought I'd share it so I can get some CnC to improve.

    [​IMG]
     
    #1 Miraj, Jun 3, 2009
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  2. Plan B

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    I definitely think a sharpened pencil would have helped.
    overall not bad
     
    #2 Plan B, Jun 3, 2009
  3. Miraj

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    The scanner actually messed up most of the picture because the lighter shades aren't visible.
     
    #3 Miraj, Jun 3, 2009
  4. EGP

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    You know you spelled master chief wrong?

    Any way, if you have no experience from the past with this, I think it turned out pretty good. Why don't you use a regular sharpened pencil though?
     
    #4 EGP, Jun 3, 2009
  5. Miraj

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    I had to get a new pencil and I couldn't find a sharpener, so I carved it.
     
    #5 Miraj, Jun 3, 2009
  6. Icecikle

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    hmm...try working on proportions
     
    #6 Icecikle, Jun 3, 2009
  7. Frag Man

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    Well, you got the helmet down.
     
    #7 Frag Man, Jun 3, 2009
  8. DC

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    i like your doodles.
     
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  9. Miraj

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    I fixed the scanner problem.

    It should look more clearer now.

    [​IMG]
     
    #9 Miraj, Jun 3, 2009
  10. Mr Garfunkle

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    His forearms are very small and his chest doesn't come out enough. Other than that nice job.
     
    #10 Mr Garfunkle, Jun 3, 2009
  11. Aschur

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    Its a fairly decent job for someone with no art learning experience. I believe the upper arms aren't bulky enough but too long, his forearms are too short and small, and his chest should stick out a tad more.

    All in all I'd say that its in a number rating a 7.777777 out of 10

    I like using sharp pencil for drawing and dull pencil for shading but that's just me.

    Good job, keep it up.
     
    #11 Aschur, Jun 3, 2009
  12. Souperintendent

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    Pretty nice artwork ya' got there! Sorry about that...

    Well his torso looks a bit... squared... but other than that this is better than I could ever do. nice job!
     
    #12 Souperintendent, Jun 3, 2009
  13. Mace

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    Proportions. You have good comp, though.
     
    #13 Mace, Jun 3, 2009
  14. R0FLninja

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    wow, this dont look half bad, i like it :D
     
    #14 R0FLninja, Jun 10, 2009
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