Manslaughter [Wall]

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  1. Whisper

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    Alright, I started off just making a simple text piece that had a word triangle (what I call the shape I made in the wallpaper below) for 'manslaughter'. I was going to highlight the vertical and horizontal 'laughter' just so it's like manslaughter, but with laughter highlighted. Hard to explain why, but you'll probably get the drift. Anyway, long story short, I made it into a wallpaper. There, was that short enough? Lol.

    Comment please.
    Feel free to use.
    1920x1080 default res.
    Two versions.

    Version B.
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    Version A.
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  2. Knight Kninja

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    awesome! i love how all the text is blocky so they fit close together.

    but the T's and H's dont have the smudged background.. why?


    anyways awesome concept, great execution
     
  3. Whisper

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    what?
     
  4. Kidbomber

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    I like version B alot more then A. However i'm guessing you just inverted the whole piece and made two versions.

    One thing is that the background B is hard to see, while on A its more clearing. Maybe make the text on B a more more visible?
     
  5. Mischgasm

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    Wow, it took me 2 minutes to realize the background was blurred text. The laughter isn't highlighted enough though. You could try inverting the colors of just the word laughter.
     
  6. Whisper

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    Eh, I decided like halfway through that I didn't actually want it super highlighted. I just wanted a slight highlight to it that would draw the eye, but in a subtle manner.
     
  7. Mischgasm

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    The way it is, I didn't even notice the highlight until I zoomed in x3 looking for it because you mentioned it. Not nearly enough.
     
  8. Whisper

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    Meh, as I said before, the highlight isn't the main part in this.
     
  9. Knight Kninja

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    oh never mind..

    the letters are smudged and stuff around the outside.. i was looking and it looked like only the H and T were the only ones without it.. i was mistaken, silly me
     
  10. Whisper

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    Blatant bump.
     
  11. J4M NUTST3R

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    I love it, the top version does a lot more for me personally. And i thought Laughter was pretty well highlighted. . .Anyway, very good, KIU!
     
  12. Whisper

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  13. J4M NUTST3R

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    Keep it up ;].
     

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