Luna

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Jex Yoyo, Dec 23, 2011.

  1. Jex Yoyo

    Jex Yoyo POETRY, bitch.
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    I love the idea, but ****ing hate my execution because I don't know half of what I am doing. Anybody who can reply to this with CnC (preferably; what are the twelve things I did wrong, and how can I improve it) within an hour or so gets infinite love, because I want to finish this before I go back to her place for the holidays, because I don't like working at 3:00am, the only time when she won't be watching me.

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    Its supposed to be a Christmas present for my mother; shes a mom and will totally cheese out over anything I make, but I don't want to cringe every time I walk by wherever she ends up hanging it.
     
  2. pyro

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    I love fractals and anything semi related so I think the idea is great. Just erase the green stuff that's going outside the moon on the top right.
     
  3. Jex Yoyo

    Jex Yoyo POETRY, bitch.
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    I'd already seen that, and gone to fix it. Its all printed, so unfortunately I can't change her gift, but I would like to improve it more. Some brilliant monkey helped me fade it more, suggested I simplify the fractal a bit (which I did) and I made it look a lot better. Still not a fan of the execution though, and as I said would like to improve it more.
     
  4. Spicy Forges

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    Make it like an eclipse and add a ring of glow around it maybe?
     

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