Lighting isnt that great. You need more than just brushing on it. Effects are rather lacking. Focal is too defined yet not defined enough. Font is serif, which i dislike, and the placement and arrangement is not pleasing either. You can do better. try again.
Like Hari, not enough effects and a not well defined focal were the first things that stuck out for me. Your text seems too long.. and i know its for your name, but maybe try "Kratos" or something. Also, the girl should be sharper.. it looks kinda blurry to me.. if you want it to pop, sharpen it at least a little.