Left 4 dead

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by a hobo001, Dec 30, 2008.

  1. a hobo001

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    Hey everyone i wrote a review for Left 4 Dead id really appreciate it if everyone would go an look at it heres a link if you have any questions about the game my review will answer it for you thanks '

    http://www.squidoo.com/Left-4-Dead-1
     
  2. Shatakai

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    Your wording and sentence structure is very mediocre and makes you seem like an amateur. I suggest fixing those and any spelling mistakes for further reference. I do agree with your final standing on your game for the most part, but it really felt like more a description than a review. You focused on little things too much, like each individual special infected. Just give a little detail like "There are also what are known as Special Infected. These horrendous monsters have special abilities which include incapacitating survivors, attracting a hoard of zombies, and more!"

    Try and lengthen your opinion on the game, and try to focus on the big picture rather than smaller details.
     
  3. SPARTANZ77

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    lol you posting this here and on xforgery? ok well guide guide sir fix dat gramma and youll be all set
     
  4. a hobo001

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    ok thanks for the tip i will remember that for the future
     

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