Well I like the multiplaced render and the background but maybe the render could blend more and the words are kinda sorta hardish to read but you don't really have to change them... great job 4/5
I agree with Icecikle, the text is quite hard to read, try putting a a shadow/glow around the text in a differant colour, that should help make it stand out
Instead of adding an outer glow (I don't really like the look of them), try making the text color white...