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Discussion in 'Halo 3 Screenshots' started by KILLn Machine12, Jul 1, 2009.

  1. KILLn Machine12

    KILLn Machine12 Ancient
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    Let me know what you think about one of my first screenshots.!!!

    KILL


    b4:


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    after:

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    let me no wat u think bout it.. wat i should change and stuff............
     
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  2. TKS x MoNsTeR x

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    You should make the letters thicker and fill in the holes to make it look more realisitic.
     
  3. RaBBiiTTT

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    ^Agreed^.

    And the 'K' and the last 'L' are kinda hard to see.
    Very unique color scheme going on here, but the problems in which me and the guy above me stated have to be fixed.
     
  4. WeeGs

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    take the time to wait for a full cloud opening before settling for a picture. this is alright, but i would make the lines thicker, or at least all an even width, not fat at one end and skinny on the other, like snipers do. its alright overall
     
  5. KILLn Machine12

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    ya

    ya this was my first screenshot and i sorta rushed it not really caring bout it.... i could have made some changes where i probably will on the smoke part, seeing it more clearly, and making them thicker... F@G WEEGS, how do u make the smoke bigger so u can make it more clear and see the whole thing?
     
  6. MeNaCe x TIGER

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    Eh, tidy up the letters, make them bigger, and make sure they're actually visible.
     
  7. WeeGs

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    turn the letters so the word is parrallel with the smoke
     
  8. KILLn Machine12

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    agreed

    ya i was thinking about that WEEGS, i was thinking about overlapping the letters with the same weapons, upside down if u no what i mean. ya putting it more clearly too
     
  9. WeeGs

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    MUCH better. i would still flip another BR over and place it on the same spot on all the BRs, but it has improved greatly. now that you have the thickness down (sorta), i think it would look cooler if u used smaller weapons, allowing you to make more detailed and customized text, instead of boring old box font
     
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  10. RightSideTheory

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    The second one is wwwaaaaayyyy better.

    I can easily tell what it says now.
     
  11. chao365

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    looks like an explosion in the backround
     
  12. jpizel

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    i agree with all the othher posts the letters need to be thicker and filled
     
  13. RebelCow

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    the first picture is not working. edit your post and fix it.
     
  14. J 2tha KARDA

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    Use a nova filter so the weapons glow.
     
  15. natu

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    Try using smaller weapons and also put more detail into it. It's alright.
     

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