Justles/Ice Collab

Nice effects, compo, and colors, but the right side seems too open and full of wasted space. That's not always a bad thing, and cutting the tag wouldn't work, so why not try adding a few effects that stretch out that way.


EDIT:

Wow..... lol Left side*

 

My Theory is that the Right Side has to much open space.

 

The C4Ds go with it, but the BG knocks out all hope of flow with this.

I suggest either a new focal or new BG.

 

Colors - Awesome.

Text - Unique but hard to read at first glance.

I don't know what RightSideTheory is saying about the right side when the left side is what's empty. I like it, otherwise.