Heroic DLC Juiced

A map doesn't need interlocking and geomerging so stop saying that. Second time I've seen you post something like it. You really didn't tell him how he could improve on his map.

Onto the map. I think this looks ok but it needs to be cleaned up. I see a lot of uneven and crooked dumpsters and crates, plus it looks like the bases need some better cover than that. Aesthetics: 2.5/5 Layout: 3/5

 

Yeah, you didn't even say what he could fix, you are supposed to say what you did/didn't like in the map, specifics. careful, you post us borderline spam

Nyways, the map has an okay-ish layout, nothing spectacular
could use a little more description/narrating of the pics to describe the map a bit better.
the line of crate/ wall thing in the middle is win.
A for effort.

 

I noticed this map had only long and mid-range weapons. That can be a problem on foundry, but I havent played this so I won't say it's a bad thing yet. The thing that popped out at me the most was the crate and dumpster roofing. But then I down toward the end of the line on crates and it was just so sloppy. You should consider making this map open to more gametypes also. So just try and fix the things I mentioned and the map will be a little more yummy

 

this map looks okay, but it is not very professional. it doesn't look like too much time was taken on this map, but the crate thing at least is creative [but also very sloppy]. gameplay looks like it would be a little tilted to one part of the map. for now 3/5.

 

looks nice and i like the crate and dumster covers they are original but you need to start with geo merging and interlocking

if you dont know how just search for a guide on youtube

 

average at best. the style seems unoriginal. no dl

 

the map is a nice. i like how you have some very nice ideas. i think that with practice you would be a very good forger. your ideas look sloppy only because of your inexperience. i like the crates and dumpsters in the tunnels. they look very cool.