Sandbox Jargenhansen

Discussion in 'Halo 3 MLG Maps' started by Millinoid, May 16, 2009.

  1. Millinoid

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    Jargenhansen!

    I guess you could call in an MLG map...
    It's set in the sky bubble and has two bases, an upper level, and a lower level. Jargenhansen supports Oddball, Slayer, and CTF.
    It needs some touching up on some things, but it's just my first attempt at making a real map :p

    Link to Map: http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=78505467

    Weapons are:

    Rockets x 1
    Sniper x 2
    BR x 8
    Carbine x 4
    Plasma Grenade x 6
    Frag Grenade x 8
    Plasma Pistol x 2
    Mauler x 2

    Here's the pics:

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    Overview of map


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    Red Base


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    Blue Base



    Tell me what's good, and what's bad!
     
    #1 Millinoid, May 16, 2009
    Last edited: May 16, 2009
  2. CometCRAZIE33

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    I think this is a really good map. i am for sure downloading it. i think the middle of the map is very well done. keep making some good maps and keep trying
     
  3. Laxer

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    Wow that was a well thought out post.

    Personally this map looks extremely bland and boring. There isn't anything that stands out or is unique. And some of the walls on the ground aren't even straight. There looks like there is a lack of cover around the bases which could easily lead to spawn killing. And this map looks like you could easily fall off. Add more cover, and try to make it stand out from the others.
     
  4. Millinoid

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    i know, i made it in about 4 hours or so.. it was just a first map, not to be perfect. and when you play it, 80+ spawns is hard to spawn kill
     
  5. Gnarleywalnutt

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    This looks like a nice base of what could in the end be a pretty nice map. The bases seem a bit bland and you need to add more cover to prevent spawn killing. I would suggest changing the bridges around the sides to tubes because at the moment it seems like it would be pretty easy to fall off when the fight gets intense. Upgrade the base and put more thought into the map to make it stand out from all the others, like LAXER said.
     
  6. nbb311

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    there are no rails, there is no cover, and there is no point to anyone downloading this map until these issues are addressed. also how about releasing the map when it is more of a finished product
     
  7. Meltyourtv

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    The layout is great, but the gaps are not. I STRONGLY suggest adding some railings so you don't fall off while strafing on the wall-floors. Also, where's the blue flag xD. I only see a red one in the first pic. But, this map is pretty good looking. Very original and unique layout.
     
  8. Millinoid

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    I played it by myself so there was no blue flag lol.
     
  9. Shlbamobinladen

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    Well i do not like this map. Do not worry tho because the super forger has his own medicine that will make you teh uber forger, JK i acually like this map except for the fact that there are hardly any guard rails so people dont fall off just some advice. Goosd design tho
     

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