you have too strong of a gradient mapping and only used pentool and cropped the eyes which is good but usually you shouldn't cover the focal
Well I like it, but the eyes on the left. Ahh the eyes on the left, Beautiful and Striking, but also a distraction... not much mind you but the color difference is too much for my tastes, perhaps on the right it might do better, but then again it might not... Also the other one thing is her face, a face that beautiful shouldn't be covered, the effect lowered perhaps? ahh but if its lowered it'll end up in her armpits, which could be a funny turn out. all in all I like this sig...
meh.. never been a fan of the side images.. i do wanna say that i love the colours though.. one thing, the effects are in front of her forearm, looking like they are just sitting there.. i would suggest behind her forearm. text is good, and also i would suggest a light source?