Iron Man

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by RaBBiiTTT, May 10, 2009.

  1. RaBBiiTTT

    RaBBiiTTT Ancient
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    I have come to a conclusion that...I kinda suck with the flow.
    Still looks pretty good.
    I hope I did well.

    Oh I almost forgot, I suck with text too. That's why I don't put them on my sigs.

    This is my current submission for SOTW (Film).


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  2. Mace

    Mace Old Tyme
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    You need to blend some. your renders just sitting on top.
     
  3. Icecikle

    Icecikle Ancient
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    I completely agree with Mace on the blending. The bright liney thingies next to his head are also distracting and disrupt what little flow the sig has. BTW what are you using to make the bg?
     
  4. iTz HLG nOob

    iTz HLG nOob Ancient
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    just like what he said, like i mean look at icekels sig. it has and out burst flow comming out of the render, and BTW, icekle your render...is that dead pool (a marvel hero)


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  5. Icecikle

    Icecikle Ancient
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    NNNOOOO!!!! Not the sig in post thing again! anyway yes but its not a render its a stock
     
  6. Donii

    Donii Ancient
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    Look whos back.

    k for the sig, i rly like it accept like everyone said, the blending and those wierd lines on top, kinda takes my attention of the focal. try not to have " to shiny" of c4d next time ;D
     
  7. RaBBiiTTT

    RaBBiiTTT Ancient
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    Told you I suck with the flow :D
    The bg is obviously some C4D's that I carefully selected.
     

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