It looks pretty good, but maybe make the colors more vibrant? It is a bit too sharp, and also the C4D on the bottom right isn't so appealing.
aye, i have. and thank you BWC, both taken into consideration and ive been getting lots of negative stuff about the text.. oh well worth a try
Well, I really like just about everything in this sig except the texture/distortion around the focal. It looks very pixely and really distorts the top of the focal's head. The lighting in this sig is very nice, and I don't mind the border and text. The smudging is great.