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  1. Auburn

    Auburn a dope soul
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    I went a little overboard with the colors and saturation. I made a version without text to appease Audience o fone ;) cnc meh, critique dat, tear it apart.

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  2. Audienceofone

    Audienceofone Forerunner
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    You're so sweet. ;)

    I's suggest moving the spartan to the left a bit, he's really centered at the moment and this doesnt feel like it should be (because center=safe). You may also want to move it down a bit. Other than that, the red all feels the same. Some extra hues might be nice. however I'm not sure, so save this before you play with color.

    Also, as I apparently must say this, the text doesn't need to be there.

    Hope this helps!
     
  3. Monolith

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    I'm not really sure what the focal is... is it his left hand or his right? I don't think it's his helmet since it's so dark. Other than that, I love it, I think the overall red hue works well in this
     
  4. Auburn

    Auburn a dope soul
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    lost the xcf :( I agree, though, I had completely overlooked the rule of thirds and went overboard with hues. The colors were pretty distinguishable until I started messing with those and gradients, hahaha. Thanks, Audience.

    The focal was supposed to be the spartan as a whole with the primary focus being in the center right below the gun where the lighting begins. Thanks, ER1C0.
     
  5. PandaMan

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    GAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

    JK Abu, <3
     
  6. Behemoth

    Behemoth The Man With No Face
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    Now THAT'S an appealing signature.
    I do agree with everything that Phone said, but I might try out a touch of a dark blue or green in the flames for contrast, but it might also look disgusting. :b
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