One of your better works. The colors and Placement are nice. However,there's this weird dark red spot in the corner. It also looks a little blurry or lq. A little lacking in flow identifiers also. But overall nice, maybe tone the size of the text down. Well, since your new(Or at least to the extent of my knowledge), I'm assuming its your first, or one of the first ones you made. It looks like a render with a black background and some brushes. I would suggest starting over and maybe viewing some beginner tutorials. Try Gimptalk.com Gimper.net for some nice tuts. Yeah, better, or at least I like it better than the second version. So far, I think I'm liking the first one best, just stick with that.