I Reject

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  1. Juggernaut

    Juggernaut Ancient
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    Same style sig as my last anime one. Features Orihime from Bleach. Not my favorite work, but still.

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    #1 Juggernaut, Dec 22, 2009
  2. RaBBiiTTT

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    The C4Ds over the girl don't blend too much, which makes it look a little cut-off.
    The flow needs some improvement.

    Text is alright, but could be better.
    The colors you chose are quite unique.

    Is is just me, or is the focal brighter on "no text"?
     
    #2 RaBBiiTTT, Dec 22, 2009
  3. Juggernaut

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    Just you. I don't see a change.
     
    #3 Juggernaut, Dec 22, 2009
  4. Frag Man

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    Disgrace to anime signatures D:<

    Too bright, so it hides the depth, the flow, and bg.
     
    #4 Frag Man, Dec 22, 2009
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