These screenshits are old. They aren't cool anymore. Since you took the time to take it, I have to say that this is good. You should have had the sniper to the center of the picture a bit more.
Haha Screenshits, I thought you were serious. Try to get the spartan into the middle of the picture and angle it a bit more.
It's kinda well, boring. Not enough going on. This looks like one of those pictures where you can see through the Spartan on Avalanche, except you didn't do the see-through part.