Happiness

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  1. Frag Man

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    Kind of an ironic look at what people see beer as. I liked the idea, but I don't like how I executed it. Photo-manipulation.

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  2. HellsRequiemAMX

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    Interesting work, I think your idea was pretty good, but aesthetically blurring everything except Happiness might confused viewers, I see what you're getting at but other than that, I would have said the depth is not very good, try a version with the bottle standing up vertically.
     
  3. Frag Man

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    That would promote the happy mood. It's supposed to be melancholic.
     
  4. Mace

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    I'm confused, am I supposed to be looking at the text?
     
  5. HellsRequiemAMX

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    K I see what you mean now, try making it a little less blurry then, but keep it blurred.
     
  6. Frag Man

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    lol... didn't frag man say that to you too?
     
  8. KratosAurion777

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    The render of the bottle looks really weird on the left side, where the lower label is... its like the bottle is solid black and squared off to the right of the label, but is curved and glossy to the left...
    I actually prefer the first version to the second one because the only thing that isn't blurry is the text, which is supposed to be the focus. It might be better if you put some kind of background behind this.
     

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