Its got all the components needed for a great sig, they're just not set up right. imo. # Colour scheme is great but i've found it always helps to have a few contrasting flashes of colour whether it be fx or text, in this case a firey orange/red would do nicely. # The depth/perception is nicely done, i just think the mc is too sharpened. # The bubble-like fx and flashes of blue are again nicely executed but the composition of the bubbles is skewed and the blue fx have a different direction to the rest of the piece. # Finally, i think a nice dark border would suit it. just to frame it off nicely. Good job overall but needs a little touching up to achieve its potential.
depth is brilliant and the lighting is near perfect. the fx however are way too steep and makes the focal narrower, bubbles are sometimes over blurred and under blurred and the visor is a little too sharp at the top left. possibly my favourite ive seen from you though.