Named after the Greek god POSEIDON this ship means business at war, it capable of delivering a full spectrum of military hardware and boots on the ground. https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-SWEDYE12Z6I/UDKw3p-8fyI/AAAAAAAAASc/h8oavx8y1j8/s804/UNSC+MILLITARY+CARGO+SHIP+POISEDON+6.jpg[/IMG [IMG]https://lh3.googleusercontent.com/-rdzkbVuYCX4/UDKw5NqGLnI/AAAAAAAAASk/Kuo8jXg0nGY/s804/UNSC+MILLITARY+CARGO+SHIP+POISEDON+7.jpg]
The ship looks ok, but isnt the title of your map on little bit too long? Instead of halo reach unsc military cargo ship poseidon, you could do for example : The UNSC Poseidon, UNSC Cargo Ship Poseidon or just : The Poseidon. And i agree with Kon3Z here, you need to throw in some gameplay shots, im also curious about that.
The front and back really need some work. They both just look lazy. Also that Walkway Large sticking out in the middle just looks random and is uneeded
don't be alarmed it was designed to be this way [br][/br]Edited by merge: All right I'll get some game play images in here sometime after I'm done with my new map [br][/br]Edited by merge: Soon you'll get to see some action [br][/br]Edited by merge: The name is much more than just a name it is also a sequence of key words, making it easier to find the map in any browser and it also associates the map with the halo universe. I'll get some images in gameplay soon [br][/br]Edited by merge: Thank to all that posted in my map, have a great day and keep up the good work, we need people like you to help us in constructive criticism so that we may developed new and better maps for everyone to enjoy.
The map name needs to be shortend. I mean of course we know it's a Halo: Reach map. I think The UNSC Poseidon would be a good one to choose.
The name UNSC Poseidon is all ready taken, the name of my map makes easier to find in any browser (KEYWORDS). [br][/br]Edited by merge: (KEYWORDS) if you are looking for the a map you don't need to type in the whole name, only keywords that will bring to people to your map much faster using the different combinations of words regardless in which order you type them in.