I'd suggest blending the focal a lot more, and not applying the filter. Find some other cool effect for it.
what is up with people and that ugly ass filter. Anyways, onto the cnc. pretty ok flow, the effect kinda ruins it, but nice and clean cut out.
Don't just layer on filters. It makes it look nooby. It seems like you understand the program, but just read up a bit on how to make a really nice sig.