this is version 2:http://www.forgehub.com/forum/aesthetic-maps/24068-h-m-s-ilustrias-v2.html version 1: ok this is my first map on forgehub h.m.s ilusstrias is the pride of the british fleet. when i went to meet your navy at portsmouth i boarded it and decided to make one on halo so here she is: front veiw: side veiw: inside: there is the main ship a dock side a crane and two trucks. on board there are lots of cars and inside there are barrels and mongoses this map hasn't got any spawn points on you can download it here: Bungie.net : Community : Forum Topic Listing : Forum Reply Listing for my first post i belive i have done eveything right plz tell me if not so ok ive managed to get the photos bigger ill be making a v2 maby tomoz
from what i can see it looks ok. kinda. you need to get bigger pictures. maybe a better description. you also need some pics of the inside if there is an inside. 3/5 for now. EDIT: looks better than befor i must say. You should try and make a v2 that is much cleaner and well built. but i must say this is very good for your first post 4/5 now
the interlocking is pretty neat and the idea is great. i will give it a 4/5 for the sloppiness of the vehicles
I think you should add Geomerging or whatever it's called so the ship is not so tall or make it longer so it looks nicer.
Looks ok .. All i can suggest is some better ideas .. So just keep making maps for different gametypes ... And better interlocking .. So just keep practicing and you will be a pro in no time =]