god's pencil

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by killamnjaro, Nov 3, 2009.

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what do you think

Poll closed Nov 3, 2010.
  1. sucks

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  2. bad

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  3. ok

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  4. good

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  5. exellent

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  1. killamnjaro

    killamnjaro Ancient
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    rate and comment please

    i would just like to point out that i have never taken an art class. i have done this by teaching myself.
    next semester i will though so hopefully my work will drastically improve.

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    #1 killamnjaro, Nov 3, 2009
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  2. Y35 <3

    Y35 <3 Ancient
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    His thumb is misplaced, and it seems like its in a position that would be very hard to draw in.
     
  3. ehand88

    ehand88 Ancient
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    Haha true, it does look a little awkward. I like the idea but it just seems a little empty. Also (I know this is kind of picky), it should be finishes. I think you should do another version and expand upon this idea.
     
  4. madz333

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    Stick figures=bad
    And it should be spelled 'Finishes'
    Fix them up and its all better
     
  5. killamnjaro

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    that might be because i was using my hand to base it off of.
    just by instinct i rotated my hand slightly. so that may be why it looks awkward
     

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