Gaz [FHG2 entry]

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  1. LOCK.xcf

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    Now there is a lot to say about this character. Once i saw the new GA challenge, i had an idea. The idea was to make a so called "FPS Man", basically, a character that has parts from the most popular first person shooters.

    So i began with a simple line tool outline of the character. Then, today, i added on a lot more stuff to make him look more badass. All together, 'Gaz' has parts of characters from games like Halo 3, Killzone 2, Half-life 2, Bioshock and a little bit of Call of Duty 4.

    Now about the name. he was originally titled "FPS Man", but then my friend pointed out that he didn't have a gun. Time for a name change. The name Gaz was created long before i even had xbox live. I was playing GOW1, and my friend wanted to play some slit-screen coop. So, he plugged in a controller, and was notified that he must create an acount in order to play GOW coop. SO, i grabbed the controller. Thinking i would never use the account gain, i made the name 'Gay". Due to my quick movement of the analog, i accidentally named the account "Gaz".

    So, now to the hard part. I was done with the image when i noticed one thing. It wasn't colored. I knew it would take a long to digitally paint the image, but i wanted it to look really good. All together, the painting took around 4 hours. It was my first time digitally painting, so i really had to experiment.

    Now that i have that out of the way, i present you with Gaz V1.

    [​IMG]
     
  2. BASED GOD

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    I don't really like how it is essentially a Frankenstein, but overall it is great and a lot better than mine. I'm not too sure about the fire hand either.
     
  3. Glasgow

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    The gas mask tube looks a little weird, and the tube that just leads the the chest, and not some sort of machine on the chest, is weird.

    This is more of an opinion: The left shoulder piece should appear on the right, and the shoulder piece should also appear more angular and pointy if you got it from the Arbiter.
     
  4. Whisper

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    Coloring could be a lot better.
    Was this done with a mouse or tabby?
     
  5. LOCK.xcf

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    Every part i used from something i changed in multiple ways.

    Its from Fallout, not the Arbiter. And i will fix the tube in some way.

    Could you elaborate on how to fix the colors.

    A mouse.
     
  6. Whisper

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    I actually may be able to.

    Great tutorial:
    And a great .PDF tutorial: ImagineFX | Liberate Your Colours
     
  7. LOCK.xcf

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    Sadly, i do not feel like repainting it, and if i made the BG color different, it would look like crap, because i used that gray for some of the parts of the body.

    Thanks anyways. I will use this for further painting.
     
  8. Whisper

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    You don't need to do the BG first. Most concept artists use a white background. You can ignore the BG part of the tutorial.
    Read the PDF also
     
  9. Whisper

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    Also, sorry to double post, but I noticed two parts that didn't seem right.

    The left part, it looked to me like his arm was behind him and like charging up, so I made it appear as though the holster was in front of it. And on the right, he just seemed a little too fat, I guess :p

    [​IMG]

    Hope you don't mind.
     
  10. Nightfire

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    I can see the mix of all the games in this one character, very interesting.
    His groin area doesn't seem right, almost like there is no groin.
     
  11. Hari

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    Great job. Looks pretty professional. Im not seeing the problems other people are apparently.
     
  12. Frag Man

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    His knees have no joints.

    Anyhow, very good job.
     
  13. Donii

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    Amazing.
     
  14. LOCK.xcf

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    v2

    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]

    I will fix the groin, the knees, as well as some other little things for a v3. ALso, i will fix the plasmid, or just get rid of it...
     
    #14 LOCK.xcf, May 5, 2009
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  15. Nightfire

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    Hey i suggest you also fix his right arm where it kind of looks like his arm is in front but it's actually behind and his right hand is semi-jagged. Being the first one to be presented for the Graphics contest it's really good.
     
  16. SAVExTHExWHALES

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    Could you put the versions, in the same post so I can compare?
     
  17. Shatakai

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    Just open a tab of each one and place them in roughly the same place along the page.
     
  18. version2

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    nice solution.
     

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