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  1. loshon

    loshon Ancient
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    First sig in a while using a real person stock. Not sure I like it so much. What can I do to make it better?
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    #1 loshon, Aug 15, 2009
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  2. Frito Bandito 7

    Frito Bandito 7 Ancient
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    I dont know if im saying this right cus im not used to criticizing stuff but i like the depth in your sig but those circuler lines in the background are a tad distracting but overall awesome!
     
    #2 Frito Bandito 7, Aug 15, 2009
  3. RaBBiiTTT

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    Nice depth
    Make the text look more attractive.
    Needs some more lighting.
    Not a fan of the C4Ds you used.
     
    #3 RaBBiiTTT, Aug 15, 2009
  4. a dying animal

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    The text needs to stand out a little more.
     
    #4 a dying animal, Aug 15, 2009
  5. J4M NUTST3R

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    It's very monotone and the text needs some work. Other than that it looks great :D.
     
    #5 J4M NUTST3R, Aug 15, 2009
  6. loshon

    loshon Ancient
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    Updated with v2.
     
    #6 loshon, Aug 15, 2009
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