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Discussion in 'Halo 3 Race Maps' started by Brown Spider 11, Dec 22, 2008.

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How do rate this map?

  1. Very nice

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  2. Decent

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  3. Needs work

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  1. Brown Spider 11

    Brown Spider 11 Ancient
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    Author: Brown Spider 11

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    This track took me about 3 hours to make. It has a elevator, a shield door
    drop, and a banked turn. It also has a starting gate with 8 mongoose. The track also has some great interlocking in it. There are also shield doors to help you make the turns. There are also explosions in the center of the banked turn to make it more interesting. It is double wide as well, hope you like it! This is also my first track.

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  2. RaBBiiTTT

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    Yes I agree. Add at least 3 more pics especially an overview pic. Try to interlock your double box barriers to make them more neat.

    I don't see much height on this racetrack so I suggest putting some. Good luck in v2.
     
  3. halo kid

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    From the little I see of this map its terrible.no interlocking or geomerging.It seems the most advanced thing you did was sideways gravity lifts.hate to be mean but this map is bad.2/5
     
  4. Yo Mommas Foot

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    (That post is spam please refrain from doing that)

    but anyways i would
    like to see more pics of this map before i can be really straightforward and give you a good review but i can tell you one thing if you were planning on making this into a turnament map or something were people can actually have fun on i would remove the fusion coils because i realize that makes it harder for people
     
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  5. smitty0018

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    How is that spam?

    OT: I'm really not seeing any of the interlocking you talked about. Even from the two pictures that you posted, I can tell that there are many places that are empty that could use interlocking.

    Another thing that annoys me (I don't know if this annoys anyone else) is the fact that there are fusion coils on the map. Fusion coils, in my opinion, take away from the racing aspect of the game and completely ruin it.

    I cant honestly see how this is going to be made into a v2. The fact that it lacks any height from what I can see means a v2 would have to be a complete rework of the map, which would basically just make it a new map.

    1/10
     
  6. EGP

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    Who are you to say anything, my gosh who are you lol

    But ya you need to add more pictures of what your map looks like if you want people to download.

    Add them and i will review
     
  7. Yo Mommas Foot

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    All he did was insult the guy he never really gave him any constructive critisism he just told him that his map was bad nothing else.
     
  8. The Desert Fox

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    need more pix. map lools sloppily made and uneven. .001/5
     
  9. Plasma Napkin

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    From what I can see on the pics, you have random explosives on your map, what can be really annoying. You use the ground of the map and a fence wall to get up, without geomerging, what slows the gameplay. All in all, you map looks really bad. You need also more pics, but if it took you 3 hours only, there may be not much more. 1.5/5, because it could be even worse.

    Madness!
     

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