YouTube- A Moment with Speed-e: Private Search on Skidrow As the title said, my first gameplay/commentary to MW2, and I'm looking for suggestions to improve in both areas. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Enjoy.
I would like to see more discussion on the actual gameplay itself rather than other topics. This is your first, and it's a good in regards to introducing what you're going to have on your channel, but you didn't sound excited or enthusiastic. You were very monotone and seemed to just pic topics at random. I suggest writing out what you're going to say and then practicing before you commentate.
I agree with what he^^ said. I think it was good to introduce your channel and yourself. But, for future commentaries I think you should talk about actual gameplay. Maybe, weapon choice for that game. Why you picked it. Etc. Also, I think you should post more serious gameplay. I mean the occasional fun game with friends is cool but its not as fun to watch unless lolz pursue. I also agree that you should plan what you are going to say so you are less monotone and there is more entertaining commentary. looks good so far. Not bad at all for your first.