Been a while, so be brutal. Go. Oh yeah, here's an old sig I did similar to this: Spoiler ZOMG it sucks
i like the FX but to be brutal, its flat and boring, and most of the FX are just carried over from the stock. lighting is very poor and makes it over exposed.
I think the render is too faded out. In my opinion it would look good if you could actually see the render better, for the most part I like the effects.