First anime in a short while.

Oversharpened.

All I have to say.

(Also, it's a bit boring.)

 

Put some effects over, and behind the render.
Creates depth.

 

Then don't be lazy, and put some over the girl anyways.

 

What he said.

 

Isn't this basically spam? I mean, c'mon. It doesn't take much effort to say "what he said," and the comment has already been spoken. No need to say anything unless you actually have something more, right?