NO!!! Why the windows movie maker text in at the end? Why would you do that?! Seriously, though the cinematography was quite well and was impressed by it to be honest. However, this was supposed to be humorous, and it seemed like it could have been (it did make me smile) but the overall seriousness dampened the comedy. I kept waiting for a final punch line at the end, yet it never came. You had the perfect set up for a good joke there at the end, but it ended on a serious note just as it started. However, it was still fairly good, I just feel like better can be made with this subject.