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Text is off to my taste.. Looks childish almost..
But maybe thats what look you were going for.

Lighting and c4d usage looks great. I like the displacement although i would have liked to see a little differentiation in the displaced image.
Good work overall

 

Text is all I would change, other than that I think it's great.

 

I like the text. Lower the opacity of the displaced image and this will be one sexy tag.

 

try some bokeh light effects, it would help fill up the too much negative space.
Work on the text too

 

This.

But much better, and a change in styles! nice one .