Welcome to Expedition, make by yours truly, arceushero, and carrerkilla8585. This is a competitive map made for neutral bomb and slayer. It is vehicle heavy, and features heavy artillery on top of both bases, one is a stationary rocket hog, and red has a removable turret. If there is anything wrong with the map PLEASE tell me, as this is my first map.
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Guess you didnt read the edit. I had uploaded the screenshots, but they didnt work. Now i'm in the process of fixing them. Ok, fixed now, and sorry if i sounded rude.
Wow...This map looks borderline unplayable. Any enjoyment recieved would be minimal. Here, take this and try to use it. If you follow half of the steps there, you'll have a great map in no time. This here is the type of map that you play with friends. Once. If you're going to post a map, it should be the type that makes us say "wow", and that makes people want to download. I'm not trying to be mean, even though I may come off as it. Everyone has the potential to make great maps, and I want to help them achieve that. Also, think about reading the Rules when visiting new forums.
First off, i know you are trying to help. Secondly, you didn't give a single reason about WHY it isn't good. Thats just criticism, not CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM if i don't know whats wrong with it still. I did read the rules, but the screenshots didn't work. I actually said that in my edit, and fixed it soon. I know the post looks disorganized but i couldn't fix how the pictures are. If you have a complaint, PLEASE tell me specifically what is wrong with it. Borderline unplayable is not constructive criticism unless you give reasons. Edit: Just checked and my map still has 0 downloads. Please download it before giving it a bad review.
you built two bases in blood gulch, and put names made out of rocks above them. The bases arent even well forged by halo 3 standards. On top of that, it doesn't even look balanced. One base has a 6 mongooses, 2 hogs, and a rocket hog turret, the other base has only 2 hogs. It looks like you and your friend just decided to build 2 bases and see who makes the better one.
Ok, thanks for the criticism. I'll see if i can make it better. Added after 2 Hours 3 minutes: Ok guys, i am going to try to make this map 100x better. I took out the mongooses, replaced the rocket hog with a turret, and am going to make a huge ship above the map firing killballs.