Loosen up on the effects, you can barely make out the elite without the addition of the text. Nice color scheming, um, it's hard to say anything else merely because the effects are overdone. Lower the opacity or erase around the elite's head.
There's an Elite in there? *checks stock* Well, I'll be damned. Definitely need to ease up on the effects, my friend. Can barely make out what's behind all that. Good premise, but needs more clarification.