On second glance, this is a really good map. Your first picture just doesn't draw people in like the rest of them do. I'd recommend changing the order of your screenshots and show and overview of the map first.
Nemihara, you said exactly what i was thinking, im a big fan of spillway, and I love playing it, so from the first picture i was thinking it looked exactly the same. But ill give it a try.
i agree if you can take them and merge them right on the ground so the gernades bounce, but you cannot hide behind them, then at the end, if you put some grav lifts facing down it looks like the water is pouring down, just some ideas to boost the visual appeal
It looks like a very nice map, nice interlocking but my only complaint is that all the weapons seem to be in one area?