Defection

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by oO SwAmPii Oo, Dec 4, 2008.

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How is it for a first?

  1. ehh

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  2. its not great

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  3. okay now its great!

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  4. now its above great

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  1. oO SwAmPii Oo

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    DEFECTION
    ( I know its an odd name )


    HELLO!! This is my first map. So no HATERS. Only constructive criticism kk.​

    This map is ( I think ) asymmetrical.

    Gameplay is tight and hectic.Crazy and severe
    Recommended gametype: crazy king w/ BR spawn
    Doesnt support Infection or VIP (sry!)

    I know that it is escapable at some parts but if you get out of it you wont score sooo you wont win :p

    THANK YOU for the positive support guyz

    DOWNLOAD HERE




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    ONCE AGAIN

    DOWNLOAD HERE
     
    #1 oO SwAmPii Oo, Dec 4, 2008
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  2. D34thly F1r3

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    Woah this map looks pretty good, i can see some interlocking and one piece of merging probably needs moar

    Overall for a rookie id give u about a 4/4.8 because the map has a nice layout and has encorporated interlocking which some newbies don't do..

    EDIT: After re-looking at the map, i realised that the interlocking is REALLY good, there is vertical interlocking which is really kool, and all this map needs is maybe some aesthetics and more merging and it is top quality stuff well done! 4.2/4.8 still because ur a rookie, if u were a veteran user, i would give you about a 3.7/4.8 but thats still really good, well done!
     
  3. pinohkio

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    i cogradulate you good sir for making a near feature worthy first map.
    the only things wrong is there is no weapon list on the post nor is there any aesthetics that i can see on the map, maybe you could go through and interlock things into the walls for more visuals.
    4/5
     
  4. Zachary9990

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    You didn't even have to ask for no haters. This is a beautiful map well above the forging level of many on this website. My only recommendation would be to make the map unescapable (trust me I saw a few spots) and to maybe take some more time and interlock the single boxes vertically with your double boxes just for a more asthetic feel.
    Just from the look I give it a 4.5/5 but Ill have to play it inorder to see how the gameplay goes.

    Love,
    Zachary9990
     
  5. Master Debayter

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    Good job on this map, you even geo-merged (I didn't see it at first, but there's a single box going into the floor). I love of the layout of the map. It's not too open, although a little compact, but that's ok because there's more oppurtunity to take cover.

    My major concern with this map is that those bridges in the first picture allow you full access to the top of the map, which is not good. By the looks of it, with some grenade-jumping, you'd be able to get on top of most of the map structures, the crane, and even along the top of the outer walls (near the vents). Fix this problem and you'll have my download.
     
  6. zackj191

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    Very good map from the picture. I don't know how well it plays though because I don't have time to test in the mornings(school...). But from the pictures 4/5.

    Why do you have to suck at forging if your new here? I have a friend on XBL that is amazing at forgeing. You saying he is supposed to suck?
     
  7. Mero90

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    amazing, for a first time you clearly took your time and made it as good as possible

    little things like merging the single boxes, and making the map unbreakable are all it needs

    and it is asymmetrical
     
  8. deathdog1205

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    seems like a very veteran style map. love the upper parts with the bridges. your post could use some action pics, recommended game types and a weapon list. besides that seems very good.
     
  9. desert rat 852

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    Im impressed. Your interlocking and your geo-merging are near perfect, and like someone above said, you didnt need to ask for no haters, you probably wouldnt get any anyway.

    A very rare review will come from me later, and you, good sir, have a bright forging future ahead of you...

    Cheers!
    Desert Rat 852


    P.S.: Dont be surprised if this gets some High Recognition around the community, and Welcome to Forgehub!
     
  10. Cydronix

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    The map is really good and fun to play on, The weapon layout is so-so but It is still a pretty good map, keep up the good work! 4.5/5

    ~Cydronix
     
  11. atc cvhawley

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    great map for rookie could do a bit better geomerging but what gametypes does this map support
    4.5/5
     
  12. AItius

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    Awesome map, it reminds me of Hang em' High. I love how the structures are different, yet the same, if that makes any sense. I do, however, see a shield door in the first picture, and although it is just one, it still can be bad for a map. It's your call on whether or not to keep it, that's just my opinion.
     
  13. mikeblair333

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    Alright, I DLed and looked over in forge. It's pretty sweet, with a few minor bugs. Some places are a little out of line, and can cause your map to be less neat. One good example is on the window side of foundry, where the stair bridge is way off from the outlying structures. What I would suggest to fix this problem is topping the stairs off with an upside down bridge and fusing that into the boxes beside the bridge to smooth out the bridge and get rid of the gaping holes in the bridge. Other than that, this map is very well thought out and well implemented. Excellent job, 8.5/10
     

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