I actually really like this. I wish that his shoulder weren't so bright, it distracts from the rest of the image. Otherwise, I really like the color choice, and the background looks good too, though it could use a bit of contrast from the foreground.
never really seen or played deadspace. in general its good and like Kuroda said the should kind of stands out a little too much compared to the rest of the pic
The focal is sort of badly defined, the eye doesnt prefer the face, but rather drifts between the face, shoulder and gun, due to them all standing apart from the background to equal degrees and positioned in spots reserved for the focal. Effects are pretty good. It would be interesting to see what could be done with some subtle text.