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  1. ZCT

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  2. Knight Kninja

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    the left side looks strangely empty..

    also, the render looks kinda out of place, and your lighting could use some work.

    but the colour of the sig looks great! i like the teal stars they look good
     
  3. loshon

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    Kninja's right, the render looks out of place, and the effects/smudging to the left of the guy would look better being smudged towards him, instead of away. Neat sparkles, though, and good color.
     
  4. ZCT

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    It's actually a stock.. lol.
     
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    I see. Either you chose a bad stock or you didn't render it well enough, or something, because "It Don't Work."
     
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    Ok the left is to empty and you need more light. Last of wall the weird writing near the bottom i would suggest have it running all the way along.
     
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    he did a great render job actually.. i just think maybe the qualities didnt match or something
     
  8. ZCT

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    It's not a render. It's a stock. As in stock picture.

    Loshon. How is that constructive?..

    Thanks animal. I agree. I might add some more lighting. However, I think I'll keep the text as is. I like it ;p

    The left side is somewhat empty to create more depth. It's suppose to be somewhat peaceful and calm also. If i filled that up with useless efx, then it becomes chaotic.

    I think the lighting behind him as in the light on his shoulders and necks doesnt need to be there.. So I might make a V2.
     

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