I would say with border is better. But the BG is kind of boring. You could add some more color maybe like a low opacity red or something. The text is pretty good. You could sharpen the focal a little imo. But good job.
I already sharpened the focal I think, if I am not mistaken, about 35%. It's just that the stock really is like that. The character in the stock is really in motion so that's why is appears like that. Thanks for the feedback.