Vientus submitted a new map: Containment Protocol - Warning containment failure! We must contain this outbreak before its too late! Read more about this map...
The gravemind looks sick, but I'd do the colors different (it has too much of a plastic look instead of a fleshy look). I think your idea itself is great, but the layout got confusing to me. I often didn't know where I could actually go to and where not. Although I love maps that tell a story, yours is a bit much. Too much going on, very distracting.