So, me and Ice gave another go at a collaboration, we definitely think that his was more succesful than our other collaboration. Here is Ice's text: Here is my text: ALSO I made my own little version of this signature: Personally, I like the collab outcome more.
Collab with Ice's text is better IMO. I don't know it just looks better for me. Maybe because of that shadow. The clipping mask does not blend with the bg so yeah. The lighting is better in your version. So, the best for me would be like Ice's text placed onto your version (not collab)
Oops. Oh yeah my bad. Sorry. I'm still an intermediate in this so yah my bad. Ice's text + Hell's own work = the best out of all.
Best. The text is clearly visible, but it distracts too much of the focal. Effects are too sharp, and are grainy. They help drag away the focal. The background has nice depth, but in some places it isn't blurred. You can see a bit of sharp in the background sometimes.